Selected Poetry by Cecile Hare
November Poetry Feature

 

Big Sur Day

"Leave the town and come with me,
Big Sur's calling, let us go
on the road beside the sea
where the salt filled breezes blow."
What a journey - what a drive,
Highway One to Monterey,
Made me glad to be alive
on this happy July day.

There were surfers diving through
waves that rolled past to the strand.
Standing on their boards they flew
swooping, twisting back to land.
Through the windows open wide,
glorious scents and sounds came in,
coming from the countryside
far from town's eternal din.

Here and there a house I'd see
nestling in the green leafed space.
Oh how happy they must be
living in that perfect place.
Seaside rocks were lit with spray,
boiling sea just sparkled white,
bright around the cliffs of grey
In the sunshine's brilliant light.

Homeward bound from Monterey -
hairpin bend and twisting lane -
we'd had such a happy day,
would it ever come again?
We thought we would stay a while
looking at the sea green view.
Looking up I saw him smile -
saying what I always knew.

Let the others pass us by
till the starlit sky is bright.
In each other's arms we'll lie,
listening to the quiet night.

Mantis Religiosa

The praying mantis lived on my roses,
two hands raised in supplication.
She seemed to be permanently praying
to the Mantis god,
a plea for more insects.

When I visited her daily
quietly moving near,
she would raise her head a little,
then slowly turn it and gaze at me
with a dark frightening look.

A triangular head with strange eyes,
millions of years older than mine.
Did she see hundreds of me?
Or just one large moving object
that didn't seem to be a prospective meal.

The Minstrels of 1524

Come on boys let's choose our gear,
what tunes shall we give them here?
It's a day for merry making.
Round the maypole they'll be dancing,
lassies skip and lads go prancing.
It's May Day and we shall sing.
Pipe and tabor's just the thing
that will make the rafters ring.

After playing on the flute
William's plucking on his lute,
practicing his pizzicato.
The youngest player yet he's good
and plays just as a young man should.
Now and then he winks his eye
as the young girls pass him by,
making them all blush and sigh.

Barty, puffed cheeked, stands and blows
as the slide tube comes and goes
in and out of the brass sacbut.
It's as well that he is taller
than the one in front - much smaller
Roger plays the bag-pipes and
at the dulcimer he'll stand,
sticks of willow in each hand.

Here's their Hurdy Gurdy man.
Hugh will play well if he can -
handle turning must be even.
Finally there's John, the Master
of the Guild. He can drum faster
than the rest but will slow down
when he's marching into town
in his beautiful blue gown.

When you are in Beverley
and go to church, look up, and see
meant for all posterity,
carved in stone, with pride they're filled,
the members of the Minstrel's Guild.

We would look at each other,
but there was no communication.
If my dog looked at me, I would say:
"Good boy, here's a biscuit."
I once tried "Good girl, here's an insect,"
but only got a supercilious stare
and a turning away of that head
from the proffered tidbit.

She was pink and white
like the roses on her bushy home.
So gentle and serene,
she seemed to be contemplating my garden
in a very wise way.

Sometimes I would see her catch her lunch.
Those two paws were not at prayer,
they were poised to dash out at the speed of light,
and to clasp some flying insect
as it sailed by.
No hesitation then,
she would cram it in her mouth horizontally.
One end an unmoving silent head
peeping out with a feeler or two.
At the other side of the calm mantis mouth
were protruding maybe two wing cases
and a few slowly writhing legs.
And the huntress quietly studying me
while chewing on the dainty.

Once I saw a male eyeing her from a distant blossom,
weighing up his chances
in the fraught and dangerous game of love.

This is a tricky situation, involving
death and the survival of the species.
Female mantises don't seem to like males.
In fact, "not like" is putting it mildly.
On the other hand,
she wants to have little ones.
How to do this?
From both sides of the question:

Mantus approaches from behind with great care.
The legs, striped like football stockings
are moving imperceptibly,
pausing now and again
while he pretends to view the scenery.
Manta, chewing gently, eases one or two back legs.
Mantus, very, very slowly and carefully climbs on
and then stops all movement, important this.

His ladylove finishes her meal
and turns her head to see what is going on.
Statue-like, Mantus allows not a quiver,
stroking is not a good thing at this stage.
After a long pause, he gently moves,
with the rhythm of his love.
She turns again and he is frozen
absolutely still.
As long she sees no sign of life he is safe.
Alas, he cannot control himself any longer
and with speed and finesse
she whips her head round
and bites his off.

She chews thoughtfully.

He is incredible. He keeps on moving,
headless, and the species survives.

Was she not in the mood right now?
Did she have a headache?
Had he been caught by her with another mantis?
No.
It's just the way a praying mantis lives.
That beautiful carefree
motherly and deadly creature.

Praying Mantis

Remembering

The sun shone hard that distant heat-hazed day.
Singing and cycling, we chased each other over the moor,
till we flung ourselves down on the hot prickly ground,
strong smelling bracken all around.
And our laughter suddenly stopped.

We watched a skylark climb, and hover
singing. Then it dropped and zoomed down.
Turning, I saw Jim with a pale face
stare deep into my eyes as if he saw my soul.
Slowly, trembling, his hand moved and held my new breast.
Ah! What a good bad feeling it was.

Not asking for, but wanting,
not knowing what, but shouting inside.
The darling boy took his hand away,
"I love you too much to do this" he sighed.
Half frightened of the unknown
I jumped to my feet.

"Race you down the hill," I cried,
hurting so much, deep inside.
Lost love, where are you now?
Whose old breast are you stroking with your gnarled hands?
Are you thinking of the hot sun and the smell of the bracken?
Do you still hear the skylark's song?

Copyright © 2001 Cecile Hare

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About the Author

      Cecile Hare, the mother of three, has lived in Uganda and Zambia and now makes her home in North Yorkshire, England. She began writing poetry forty-five years ago with the beginning of "First Steps," and then she allowed her poetry to languish until last year when she was given a computer by one of her two daughters.
      Through her daughter she discovered the now defunct website Ancient Sites. Soon Cecile was writing poems there, which she claims were merely a form of "mental exercise" but were certainly helpful in honing her poetic skills.
      On holiday in America in summer, 2001, she was able to meet some of her online friends, and she visited New York City and California. Apparently, this experience did not ruin her. Upon her return, she wrote an article on her trip and sold it to British Airways!

Images:
Previous page, top: "La charrette fantome," brush on canvas, DS Dali, 1933, from the collection of Edward F. W. James, Sussex (Angleterre)
This page, top: photo "Minstrels" © 2001 Cecile Hare

Reader's Comments


Cecile, I once enjoyed reading your poetry at AncientSites, and now I'm delighted to see you featured here. The pantoum is wonderful; thank you for introducing me to the form. My other favorites have a Roman theme: "The Picnic" and "Afternoon on the Moors". Thanks for sharing your poetry with me.
Roger Robison <robison@texas.net>
- Tuesday, November 20, 2001 at 18:19:42 (EST)
All your poetry is good to read. I must admit a special fondness for the one about the praying mantis - it is so beautifully observed and what a subject too!! Looking forward to enjoying more of your work.
Hilary Sanders <hilarysanders@go.com>
- Sunday, November 18, 2001 at 03:33:58 (EST)
Cecile, your talent shines out. No more hiding it now!
Margery Grange
- Saturday, November 17, 2001 at 13:57:29 (EST)
What a lovely collection of poetry. The lovely poetry with the Praying Mantis is a breath of fresh air, although it's all a pleasure to read.
Diane Schuller <moonwind@telusplanet.net>
- Monday, November 12, 2001 at 12:19:13 (EST)
Such beautiful poetry! Thanks so much for sharing it.
Ellen O'Riley <ellenoriley@yahoo.com>
- Friday, November 09, 2001 at 14:02:28 (EST)
What wonderful stuff! My particular favourites are "Remembering" and "Present to the Past."

Now that you're back on the poetry track, does this mean that you have those 'lost' 44 years' worth of poetry still to write?! From the quantity and diversity here I would guess "yes!" :-)

Rosie Sanders <rosie_sanders@hotmail.com>
- Wednesday, November 07, 2001 at 10:16:12 (EST)
Dear girl it is my great pleasure to view all the finished works complete with illustrations. Your poetry is lovely and you have taught me more than you'll ever know! I am forever in your debt. Thanks for all the beauty you create.
Lou Harper
- Sunday, November 04, 2001 at 09:11:03 (EST)
She is one of the finest poets I have ever read.
"Oh I just play with the words" she tells me.
Some playing!....Some Poet!.

Bethany DeLucy <beppy_uk77@hotmail.com>
- Sunday, November 04, 2001 at 07:21:04 (EST)
Cecile, these are lovely works. I'm particularly fond of the Big Sur as I made that drive any number of times. Great writing also in Mantis Religiosa. Glad to read your work!
Sue Turner <SusanT1466@aol.com>
- Friday, November 02, 2001 at 19:32:54 (EST)

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